for me may not
be good for me
I say as the light
takes off its clothes
who ever thinks of
of what I might
be feeling just a
little bit ahead of
me it’s creepy love
is craven and a
little creepy as if
to say you’re mine
from now on nothing
will be the same
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This one reminded me of Mark Salerno for some reason. You haven't reminded me of him in the past. He used to edit a great mag, ARSENAL. I think that was the name. Maybe it's still current...I'm not so don't know. I enjoyed his one book of poetry and some mag pieces I saw. The book was titled Hate. I just Googled him and found he had a book out through Salt in 2007: http://www.saltpublishing.com/writers/profile.php?recordID=209957
Anyway, just mention just in case you might like his stuff. He does the skinny poem thing too but as with you there's a lot of negative capability. Like you, no arbitrary line breaks or "faking" the skinny poem visually. There is no faking out the skinny poem lol.
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